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Chapter 9 Redundant & Awkward Words

This chapter of the Webgalactic Style Guide for Post-Modern Writers lists pairs of phrases or words, with the "weak" version contrasted with the "better" version.

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These words and phrases have their place only in history books, legal halls and the poetic prose of fiction writers and orators. We've found better ways to get your point across without using redundant, awkward or pretentious statements. The following chart lists "weak" and "better" ways to express yourself:

W E A K B E T T E R  

A

 

 

absolutely essential

essential

accompany

go with

accordingly

so

additional

added, more, other

address

discuss

adequate enough

enough

adjacent to

next to

afford an opportunity

allow, let

anticipate

expect

a large number/part

many/most

a number of

some

a variety of

many, different

appreciable

many

approximately

about

as a means of

to

at the present time

now

top

B

 

 

basic fundamentals

basics

be responsible for

handle

top

C

 

 

capability/capable of

ability/can

center around

center in, at or on

comes into conflict

conflicts

commitment to excellence

quality

 

comply with

follow

comprise

form, include, make up

concerning

about, on

constitutes

is, forms, makes up

construct

build

contact

call, write, reach

currently

omit it. It’s already implied.

cutting edge

forefront, frontier

cutting-edge

leading, pioneering, progressive

 top

D

 

 

designate

appoint, choose, name

determine

decide, figure, find

do not hesitate to call

call

due to the fact that

due to, since

top

E

 

 

equitable

fair

evidenced

showed, shown

exhibit

show

exhibits a tendency to

tends to

top

F

 

 

facilitate

ease, help

factor

reason, cause

feedback, input

opinion, reaction

foreign imports

imports

for the purpose of

to

furnish

give, send

future prospects

prospects

top

G

 

 

generate

do, make, create

gives consideration to

considers

top

H

 

 

head up

head

high tech

pioneering technology (or a more specific substitute)

 

holds a belief

believes

top

I

 

 

if at all possible

if possible

impacted

affected, changed, hit

implement

carry out, do, follow

in accordance with

by, following, under

in addition

also, besides, too

in an effort to

to

in conjunction with

with

in order to

to

in the near future

soon

inception

start, beginning

initiate

start, begin

innovative

creative, pioneering, inventive

 

input

comments, advice, response

top

J

 

 

joint cooperation

cooperation

just exactly

exactly

top

K

 

 

L

 

 

legislation

law

top

M

 

 

makes an attempt

attempts, tries

maximize

increase, enlarge, expand, broaden

 

may/maybe

can/can be

minimize

decrease, lessen, reduce

modify

change

top

N

 

 

necessary (pre)requisites

(pre)requisites

 

new innovations

innovations

numerous

many, most

top

O

 

 

objective

aim, goal

optimum

best, greatest, most

output

comment, idea

top

P

 

 

past experience

experience

personnel

people, staff

pre-planning

planning

prioritize

put in order

prior to

before

provides guidance for

guides

possibly might

might

postpone until later

postpone

purpose is to

(unnecessary)

top

Q

 

 

qualified expert

expert

top

R

 

 

(in the) real world

in the world, in society, in business

 

real-world problem

practical issue, business (or social) issue or problem

 

refer back

refer

retain

keep

top

S

 

 

send a communication to

notify

 

similar to

like

solicit

ask for

state-of-the-art

latest

top

T

 

 

try and fix

try to fix

top

U

 

 

unique

one-of-a-kind (literal) exciting, new, unusual (as often used)

 

utilize, utilization

use

top

V

 

 

viable

practical, workable

top

W

 

 

warrant

call for, permit

whereas

since

wide range

many, range

wide variety

many, variety

without further delay

now, immediately

with the exception of

except for

top

X

 

 

Y

 

 

Z

 

 


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